Friday, August 30, 2013

Waterfront Park

I wrote this a long time ago, but it fits the assignment this week for my Poetry class so I'm turning it in. Why not share?


The swings are always full at Waterfront Park.
People pile on all together, to swing by the view
of Charleston’s harbor and the Ravenel Bridge.

Many people have cameras hanging on their necks,
eagerly awaiting the next dolphin to surface
or to snap the next famous photo of the Yorktown.

Some people ignore the view all together
and frolic like children in the Pineapple fountain
or in the water spouts that I think look like a compass.

Other people find themselves busy playing1
a game of soccer or Frisbee in the greenway,
their dogs running alongside them, panting.

Those apartments that create a wall behind the park,
they are very expensive, and the people who live there
probably don’t enjoy the view that they pay for
as much as they used to when they first moved in.
Such a shame and waste of thousands.

There’s a boardwalk at the other end of the park.
Many people don’t even know its there.
It juts out into the Cooper River, wood on wood.
I have some good memories there that I can’t recreate.

By God, I wish I could.
By God, I wish people understood.

Bear Attack

This is another assignment for my Fiction class. The idea was to write something very hot (dramatic and climactic), but in a way that is cold (detached and "not fully there"). Also, the first sentence of the story had to be, "When I looked up, I saw the bear". It could only be a page in length.

When I looked up, I saw the bear. It ran at him so fast that I couldn’t help but admire the speed of the large creature. How could something so fat and heavy run so awfully fast? Its speed gave my husband no time to defend himself and also no time for me to do anything to help him. My arm instinctively reached out to my son beside me and pushed him into the tent. As soon as I did, the first splatter of blood hit my face, some flying into the flame of the fire we had just started for very early breakfast.

One giant paw had flown through the air and landed on the side of my husband’s face, claws ripping through his flesh. His high cheekbones became clearly visible, white bone against red blood. I halfway watched the scene while gathering our cooking gear. I could save our stuff, even if I could not save my husband. I looked up again to see my spouse trying to kick the bear off of him with his skinny legs, his left hand reaching up to try and hold the skin onto his face. I couldn’t decide if I was nauseated or intrigued.

The bear grew more angry as my husband kicked him violent with his metal hiking boots and used his weapon of a paw to plow right through my husband’s shin, snapping the leg clean in two. I heard a scream erupt from my husband’s throat, but I lost its sound when I zipped up the tent and felt around in the dark shelter for my son’s body. I heard a few more roars from the bear and some painful grunts from my husband before all went silent. I waited a good while before I exited the tent once again to see if Richard was still alive.

He was very still and eerily quiet. His neck was bent sideways, skin dangling off the bone into the dirt below. His shirt was stained red and his body was mangled in a way that I had never seen before. I wasn’t sure how to feel.

“Go get in the car,” I told my son. “It’s time to go home now.”

Thursday, August 22, 2013

Christmas Angst

First writing assignment for my fiction class! Trust me, I did not completely come up with the topic...

It was Christmas Day and warm, because this was Charleston; we were driving downtown to meet up with the ambulance that transported my father. My mind continued to replay all the times that I told him to eat better, to go to the gym with me, to just try and be healthier. I was so lost in thought that I did not notice the abundant amount of red lights that my mother was running through. She gripped the steering wheel tightly, knuckles white as bones, tears streaming down her face. My brother had begged her to let him drive, claiming that she was not in the state to do so, but a wife’s determination is never to be tested.

Pulling into the oddly-shaped horseshoe of Roper, my mother threw the van in park before bolting out and towards the electric doors. Luckily my brother had enough sense to get the keys and hand them to the valet, but I, like my mother, was also in complete focus of getting to my dad as soon as possible.

I thought about the look on his face when it hit him. His eyes dilated and looked dead into mine as he grasped his chest. I barely heard him gasp before my own heart rate accelerated from adrenaline. For some odd, morbid reason, I expected this to happen at some point. But that didn’t change the fear in my stomach or the angst in my heart at seeing him in pain. At that moment, the Christmas turkey in the oven and the unopened presents under the fake, green tree suddenly seemed so frivolous in comparison to him and his condition.

I let my brother, a third-year medical student, perform the needed treatment on my father before the ambulance arrived. As I backed up to give him room, I finally heard myself sob. I reached up to my face and realized that I was crying. I could not bear to lose him.

What Love Is (For Me)


Love is
the wagging of a tail
happily greeting you
at the door of your home
after a long day at work.

Love is
the gentle kiss on the head
from a loving husband
of twenty-seven years
before he says goodnight.

Love is
the gas that is burned
on the road to a friend’s house
to comfort them
in the late night hours.

Love is
the sound of a text
being typed and sent
under the desk in class
just to say, “I love you”
one more time today.

Love is
an email from your father
telling you he is proud
of the woman you’ve become
for no other reason
than love.

Love is
heartbreaking pain
when the man you love
with all of your heart
says that you are not at all
what he wants for a wife.

Love is
painfully stepping aside
when that man you love
asks for your best friend’s
hand in marriage
and she accepts.

Love is
a joyful heart-flutter
and a painful angst
that we all crave
and want to experience.