I wrote this a long time ago, but it fits the assignment this week for my Poetry class so I'm turning it in. Why not share?
Friday, August 30, 2013
Waterfront Park
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Bear Attack
This is another assignment for my Fiction class. The idea was to write something very hot (dramatic and climactic), but in a way that is cold (detached and "not fully there"). Also, the first sentence of the story had to be, "When I looked up, I saw the bear". It could only be a page in length.
When I looked up,
I saw the bear. It ran at him so fast that I couldn’t help but admire the speed
of the large creature. How could something so fat and heavy run so awfully
fast? Its speed gave my husband no time to defend himself and also no time for
me to do anything to help him. My arm instinctively reached out to my son
beside me and pushed him into the tent. As soon as I did, the first splatter of
blood hit my face, some flying into the flame of the fire we had just started
for very early breakfast.
One giant paw had
flown through the air and landed on the side of my husband’s face, claws ripping
through his flesh. His high cheekbones became clearly visible, white bone
against red blood. I halfway watched the scene while gathering our cooking gear.
I could save our stuff, even if I could not save my husband. I looked up again
to see my spouse trying to kick the bear off of him with his skinny legs, his
left hand reaching up to try and hold the skin onto his face. I couldn’t decide
if I was nauseated or intrigued.
The bear grew more
angry as my husband kicked him violent with his metal hiking boots and used his
weapon of a paw to plow right through my husband’s shin, snapping the leg clean
in two. I heard a scream erupt from my husband’s throat, but I lost its sound
when I zipped up the tent and felt around in the dark shelter for my son’s
body. I heard a few more roars from the bear and some painful grunts from my
husband before all went silent. I waited a good while before I exited the tent
once again to see if Richard was still alive.
He was very still
and eerily quiet. His neck was bent sideways, skin dangling off the bone into
the dirt below. His shirt was stained red and his body was mangled in a way
that I had never seen before. I wasn’t sure how to feel.
“Go get in the
car,” I told my son. “It’s time to go home now.”
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Thursday, August 22, 2013
Christmas Angst
First writing assignment for my fiction class! Trust me, I did not completely come up with the topic...
It was Christmas Day and warm,
because this was Charleston; we were driving downtown to meet up with the
ambulance that transported my father. My mind continued to replay all the times
that I told him to eat better, to go to the gym with me, to just try and be
healthier. I was so lost in thought that I did not notice the abundant amount
of red lights that my mother was running through. She gripped the steering
wheel tightly, knuckles white as bones, tears streaming down her face. My
brother had begged her to let him drive, claiming that she was not in the state
to do so, but a wife’s determination is never to be tested.
Pulling
into the oddly-shaped horseshoe of Roper, my mother threw the van in park
before bolting out and towards the electric doors. Luckily my brother had enough
sense to get the keys and hand them to the valet, but I, like my mother, was
also in complete focus of getting to my dad as soon as possible.
I thought
about the look on his face when it hit him. His eyes dilated and looked dead
into mine as he grasped his chest. I barely heard him gasp before my own heart
rate accelerated from adrenaline. For some odd, morbid reason, I expected this
to happen at some point. But that didn’t change the fear in my stomach or the
angst in my heart at seeing him in pain. At that moment, the Christmas turkey
in the oven and the unopened presents under the fake, green tree suddenly
seemed so frivolous in comparison to him and his condition.
I let my
brother, a third-year medical student, perform the needed treatment on my
father before the ambulance arrived. As I backed up to give him room, I finally
heard myself sob. I reached up to my face and realized that I was crying. I
could not bear to lose him.
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What Love Is (For Me)
Love is
the wagging of a
tail
happily greeting
you
at the door of
your home
after a long day
at work.
Love is
the gentle kiss
on the head
from a loving husband
of twenty-seven
years
before he says
goodnight.
Love is
the gas that is
burned
on the road to a
friend’s house
to comfort them
in the late
night hours.
Love is
the sound of a
text
being typed and
sent
under the desk
in class
just to say, “I
love you”
one more time
today.
Love is
an email from
your father
telling you he
is proud
of the woman
you’ve become
for no other
reason
than love.
Love is
heartbreaking
pain
when the man you
love
with all of your
heart
says that you
are not at all
what he wants
for a wife.
Love is
painfully stepping
aside
when that man
you love
asks for your
best friend’s
hand in marriage
and she accepts.
Love is
a joyful heart-flutter
and a painful
angst
that we all
crave
and want to experience.
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